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Petition ID 86: Typos: Approach Watcher on Failboat
Submitted Sun, 23 Oct 11 16:21:13 +0000

WHAT: Flavour text copypasta:
You approach the center of the room, and The Watcher's desk.The huge banks of video monitors makes the air around you feel hot and dry. From across the desk, two bespectacled eyes stare into your soul.` Watcher leans over her bank of monitors and switches and regards you with an evaluatory air.

"So. You storm off into the Island like your life depends on it, only to get your arse handed to you on a plate. There are far more interesting people we can spend air time on, you know." She leans forward and winks. "But hey, it's not all bad," she says under her breath, "I have the authority to return you to the others, and restore your airtime qualifications. Just jump in one of those cages there, and show us what you're really made of." She sits back in her chair, and turns back to her monitors. After a few moments she looks up, and scowls. "Well, what are you waiting for?"

1. Needs a space after the first sentence.
2. " ` Watcher " needs changing to " The Watcher " or similar.

HOW: On Failboat - Below Decks - Approach Watcher

WHERE: http://www.improbableisland.com/graveyard.php?c=1295-171920

WHEN: Ever since I can remember.

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