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Petition ID 125: Typos: PSK's Shady Salesman has no spaces after full stops
Submitted Fri, 28 Oct 11 12:52:19 +0000
WHAT: Flavour text copypasta:
On meeting:
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While passing through the inn, a shady figure in a black trenchcoat and fedora catches your eye and motions you over into his dark corner.You cautiously approach the man, wondering what he could want with you.Once you are close by he finally speaks, "Greetings, adventurer.You look like you could use a break, and I am just the person to give you such a break.For the pittance of only 225 Requisition, I can offer you something that will be a great asset to you on your travels.Bear in mind, I don't offer my services to just anyone, so you're very lucky.Although, you will have to decide quickly, as I am quite busy."He stands there with his hands in his deep pockets, awaiting your decision.
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On getting booze:
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Shady though he is, you decide to take up the salesman on his offer.
The salesman searches his deep pockets, then looking slightly embarrassed, he picks up a mug from the table behind him.He says to you, "You've purchased one of the best things there are around here, an ale from this very inn!"He hands you the mug and slinks off into the shadows as you drink it down.
You enjoy a cold ale!
You feel healthy!
You feel buzzed!
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Needs more spaces. If I recall correctly, all of the potential "accept offer" reactions need more spaces. (Also, my inner pedant feels that there should be a comma in "then, looking slightly embarrassed", but that's probably just me.)
HOW: Bounce in and out of PSK until you meet him
WHERE: http://www.improbableisland.com/inn.php?c=55-134421
WHEN: Ever since ever
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